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GRE高分作文五大要点
要给自己30分钟的压力,先列出提纲(10分钟),再用30分钟去写,看能写多少。 五、选材准确: 记住你的举例一定要死死扣住你的GRE作文观点,不要是和观点打擦边球的。比如我改过之前一个小朋友的文章,她的大观点是电脑对学生来说是有益的,小观点是,可以查到很多资料,然后例子是可以用google查到很多资料,很快捷。 ok,乍一看这个没有问题。但是实际上问题大了,用goole查到很多资料,是因为电脑还是internet?这很容易就偏题了,变成internet 对学生来说是有益的。例子一定要从论点出发,再回到论点。不要将你的论点发散,后果很可能就是越写越跑题。所以每次写好一篇文章,都看看,论据里的key words是不是和论点里的key words 一样,论点里的key words又是不是和题目里的key words一样。你的key words 可以比大题里的key words更加narrow,但是千万不要更加广泛。 逻辑错误是GRE作文段落中逻辑比较容易错的。一般是对接续词的运用。如However, thus, therefore,他们决定了上下文之间的关系,但是很多读起来就很奇怪,两者完全不是转折的关系,用了however,就会让人觉得有些无厘头。或者就是上下文之间完全没有逻辑联系,就是两个单句凑在了一起。还是这句话,一篇文章和流水似的,不能断。中间断了那就不叫好文章了。即使前一句与有一句没有接续词,它们在逻辑上也是要能承接的。想要去的GRE写作满分,则一定要在逻辑上完美无缺。
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GRE作文考试必备经典200句
在GRE作GRE作文中,句子的作用是无容置疑的,大家在复习作文的时候,不妨背记一些好的句式和句子。一来可以在考场上拿来就用,二来也可以锻炼自己的组织词汇的能力。本文为大家分享的200句经典句子,推荐大家有选择地背,灵活运用在GRE作文考试中。 GRE作文考试必备经典200句(一) GRE作文考试必备经典200句(二) GRE作文考试必备经典200句(三) GRE作文考试必备经典200句(四) GRE作文考试必备经典200句(五) GRE作文考试必备经典200句(六) GRE作文考试必备经典200句(七) GRE作文考试必备经典200句(八) GRE作文考试必备经典200句(九) GRE作文考试必备经典200句(十)
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GRE作文考试易丢分的地方
要给自己30分钟的压力,先列出提纲(10分钟),再用30分钟去写,看能写多少。 五、选材准确 记住你的举例一定要死死扣住你的新GRE作文观点,不要是和观点打擦边球的。GRE考试中例子一定要从论点出发,再回到论点。不要将你的论点发散,后果很可能就是越写越跑题。所以每次写好一篇文章,都看看,论据里的key words是不是和论点里的key words一样,论点里的key words又是不是和题目里的key words一样。你的key words 可以比大题里的key words更加narrow,但是千万不要更加广泛。
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GRE作文高分备考有妙招
解决而沉溺于题海战术中,往往是事倍功半。如果不能透彻地了解自己的语法或者思维方式错误的根源在哪里,而去备考,寄 希望于考试时考到自己做过的题目,这种做法是非常危险的。考生可以用实践-理论-实践这种螺旋式的进步方法,先找到问题,然后有针对性地进行系统性的学 习,打好基础;感觉有提高了再来实践,再GRE作文发现问题再提高。 最后,提醒考生:在GRE备考的过程中重点准备提纲,选择性地练习实战写作。题海战术有两个问题:一是没有解决根本问题,二 是机会成本过高。所谓机会成本,就是你花的时间过多,而这些时间本来可以用来做更有意义的事情,比如说记单词,学习语法或者看书开拓思路。所以,小编觉得 打基础的同时,要把重点放在提纲也就是思路的准备上。在Argument也许用不着每个都准备提纲,但issue
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新GRE写作Argument范文(一)
新GRE写作对于国内考生比较难的一个问题就是中国人的思维与西方人不同,所以写作的方式也不太一样。因此,大家可以通过参考一些优秀的新GRE作文的范文来提高自己的写作水平。 Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. 1.The following appeared in a memorandum written by the vice president of Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products. "Previous experience has shown that our stores are most profitable in areas where residents are highly concerned with leading healthy lives. We should therefore build our next new store in Painesville, which has many such residents. Painesville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club, which nearly closed five years ago due to lack of business, has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. We can even anticipate a new generation of customers: Painesville's schoolchildren are required to participate in a 'fitness for life' program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age." 2.The following appeared in a letter sent by a committee of homeowners from the Deer haven Acres to all homeowners in Deer haven Acres. "Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community's yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be painted. Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville. In order to raise property values in Deer haven Acres, we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and house painting." 3.The following appeared in a newspaper article about law firms in the city of Megalopolis. "In Megalopolis, the number of law school graduates who went to work for large, corporate firms declined by 15% over the last three years, whereas an increasing number of graduates took jobs at small, general practice firms. Even though large firms usually offer much higher salaries, law school graduates are choosing to work for the smaller firms most likely because they experience greater job satisfaction at smaller firms. In a survey of first-year students at a leading law school, most agreed with the statement that earning a high salary was less important to them than job satisfaction. This finding suggests that the large, corporate firms of Megalopolis will need to offer graduates more benefits and incentives and reduce the number of hours they must work." 4."Of the two leading real estate firms in our town---Adams Realty and Fitch Realty---Adams is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents. In contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch, and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago, I listed my home with Fitch and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams." 各位考生在新GRE写作练习中应加强对思维逻辑的重视,平时注意积累论据论证素材,注意借鉴一些新GRE写作范文,从中吸取对自己有利的写作经验,完善自己的作文。
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新GRE写作Argument范文(三)
新GRE写作对于国内考生比较难的一个问题就是中国人的思维与西方人不同,所以写作的方式也不太一样。因此,大家可以通过参考一些优秀的新GRE作文的范文来提高自己的写作水平。 Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. 1.The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a Batavia newspaper. "The department of agriculture in Batavia reports that the number of dairy farms throughout the country is now 25 percent greater than it was 10 years ago. During this same time period, however, the price of milk at the local Excello Food Market has increased from $1.50 to over $3.00 per gallon. To prevent farmers from continuing to receive excessive profits on an apparently increased supply of milk, the Batavia government should begin to regulate retail milk prices. Such regulation is necessary to ensure both lower prices and an adequate supply of milk for consumers." 2.The following appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of West Egg. "Two years ago, our consultants predicted that West Egg’s landfill, which is used for garbage disposal, would be completely filled within five years. During the past two years, however, town residents have been recycling twice as much aluminum and paper as they did in previous years. Next month the amount of material recycled should further increase, since charges for garbage pickup will double. Furthermore, over ninety percent of the respondents to a recent survey said that they would do more recycling in the future. Because of our residents’ strong commitment to recycling, the available space in our landfill should last for considerably longer than predicted." 3.The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Alta Manufacturing. "During the past year, Alta Manufacturing had thirty percent more on-the-job accidents than nearby Panoply Industries, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than ours. Experts believe that a significant contributing factor in many on-the-job accidents is fatigue and sleep deprivation among workers. Therefore, to reduce the number of on-the-job accidents at Alta and thereby increase productivity, we should shorten each of our three work shifts by one hour so that our employees will get adequate amounts of sleep." 4.The following appeared in a memo from the owner of Green Thumb Gardening Center, a small business serving a suburban town. "There is evidence that consumers are becoming more and more interested in growing their own -vegetables. A national survey conducted last month indicated that many consumers were dissatisfied with the quality of fresh vegetables available in supermarkets. And locally, the gardening magazine Great Gardens has sold out at the Village News stand three months in a row. Thus, we at Green Thumb Gardening Center can increase our profits by greatly expanding the variety of vegetable seeds we stock for gardeners this coming spring." graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should now terminate student evaluation of professors." 各位考生在新GRE写作练习中应加强对思维逻辑的重视,平时注意积累论据论证素材,注意借鉴一些新GRE写作范文,从中吸取对自己有利的写作经验,完善自己的作文。
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新GRE写作Argument范文(二)
新GRE写作对于国内考生比较难的一个问题就是中国人的思维与西方人不同,所以写作的方式也不太一样。因此,大家可以通过参考一些优秀的新GRE作文的范文来提高自己的写作水平。 Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. 1.The following was written as a part of an application for a small business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe. "A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus, our proposed club, the C Note, would have the local market all to itself. Plus, jazz is extremely popular in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer, several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight. Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment. It is clear that the C Note cannot help but make money." 2.The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Clear view newspaper. "In the next mayoral election, residents of Clear view should vote for Ann Green, who is a member of the Good Earth Coalition, rather than for Frank Braun, a member of the Clear view town council, because the current members are not protecting our environment. For example, during the past year the number of factories in Clear view has doubled, air pollution levels have increased, and the local hospital has treated 25 percent more patients with respiratory illnesses. If we elect Ann Green, the environmental problems in Clear view will certainly be solved." 3.The following appeared in a memorandum issued by the strategic planning department at Omni Inc. "Mesa Foods, a manufacturer of snack foods that currently markets its products within a relatively small region of the country, has strong growth potential. Mesa enjoyed a 20 percent increase in profits last year, and its best-selling product, Diabolique Salsa, has had increased sales over each of the past three years. Since Omni Inc. is interested in reaching 14-to-25 year olds, the age group that consumes the most snack food, we should buy Mesa Foods, and concentrate in particular on marketing Diabolique Salsa throughout the country." 4.The following appeared in a memorandum from a dean at Omega University. "Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risen by thirty percent. Potential employers apparently believe the grades at Omega are inflated; this would explain why Omega graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should now terminate student evaluation of professors." 各位考生在新GRE写作练习中应加强对思维逻辑的重视,平时注意积累论据论证素材,注意借鉴一些新GRE写作范文,从中吸取对自己有利的写作经验,完善自己的作文。
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GRE写作绝佳300句(十九)
to say, advertising sells products. Where would we be without it ? Shelves would be empty, consumers would have few choices and products information would disappear. 毋庸讳言,广告推销产品。没有它,情况将会怎样?货架将空空如也,消费者的选择将减少,产品的信息将消失。 GRE作文在保证逻辑思维和框架完整的情况下,备考的时候多多准备有用的句子,对大家获得高分一定有所帮助。
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简析GRE考试作文模版的整理
就是大家必须自己去总结一些好的句子好的词语,然后在里面使用了,然后在以后看文章或者看材料的时候遇到了更好的句子时就会非常敏感,马上用到以前写过的段子里。这样在日积月累中,你的固定段落就会提升提升再提升,考场上用出来保准出彩! 至于大家对雷同的底线到底在哪里的问题,ETS规定好像是连续超过13个英文字相同就会判定为雷同,但是个人感觉应该没有那么死,因为有一些固定表达每个人都会用,有时候连起来肯定会超过13个英文字,所以不想雷同的同学除了固定搭配的那些不用担心之外,其余的句子最好都是要灵活的蹂躏组合后再使用。 新GRE作文的模板复习是考生必须掌握的,在GRE考试中,对模板的整理能让考生更直观地认识到新GRE写作该如何进行,明白写作中GRE作文复习中一个比较重要的问题。考生在准备新GRE一些比较重要的或是容易被忽略的问题。小编最后希望大家都能在写作中取得自己满意的成绩。
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GRE写作绝佳300句(二二)
本文的整理,主要帮助大家在GRE写作上积累足够的句子以及有用的词汇,大家在平时的练习中也可以多多运用它们。 211. Traffic laws are of little use if drivers simply ignore them and law enforcement departments fail to adopt effective enforcement programs. 如果司机完全无视交通法,法律实施部门不能采取有效的实施程序,交通法就没有一点儿作用。 212. Agricultural modernization cannot be achieved unless the government substantially increases funding; farmers accept advanced agronomic techniques; and consumers engaged in a concerted effort to reduce unnecessary and exorbitant waste. 除非政府大幅度地增加投资;农民接受高级的农业技术;消费者共同努力减少不必要的过度的浪费,农业现代化就不能实现。 213. Effective flood control is not only necessary, but is also essential for protecting the lives of millions of Chinese citizens. 有效地控制洪水不仅是必要的,而且对保护数百万中国公民的生命来GRE说是必不可少的。 214. Simple expressions of indignation are no substitute for meaningful actions to right a wrong. 仅仅表示愤慨不能取代改正错误的有意义的行动。 215. Even modest increases in education allocations are better than none. 甚至对教育拨款的适度增加都比不增加好。 216. The slightest miscalculations in trajectory can spell doom for a successful space mission. 对轨道的细小的计算错误可以意味着对成功的太空任务的灭顶之灾。 217. Anyone with one eye and half sense ( common sense ) knows that good prevails over evil. 任何一个有一只眼睛和一半判断力(常识)的人都知道邪不压正。 218. It is impossible to reach appropriate conclusions without access to relevant information. 没有相关的信息不可能得出相关的结论。 219. The fact remains that the consequences of drug misuse and abuse can be devastating upon the entire community. 实际情况仍然是误用和滥用药物的后果对整个社会都会是破坏性的。 220. Respect is given where respect is due. 尊敬只给予值得尊敬的人。 GRE作文在保证逻辑思维和框架完整的情况下,备考的时候多多准备有用的句子,对大家获得高分一定有所帮助。
